Tuesday, January 11, 2011

response

It is sad that darkness will always exisit. Why do you think for some that the absence of light will always exisit? DO you not think they may never find a glimmer or a ray of hope? Why has society/humanity turned/existed this way? Can you bring in some more specific examples to help back up your writing. Overall you have good insight, I would just like to see you dig a little deeper.

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